Sharing: The Mistress of the Shadowland

I always write my stories in German but using the Internet to translate them. My best friend will reading over the chapters again as my reader. Does that also mean that there can still be mistakes? Probably. The last time I wrote a story was 15 years ago, so I'm very unsure whether everything is perfect.
But I'm also a bit proud of myself for starting with it. So if you would like to read it and give feedback, I would be very happy about it.
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So, please be a little bit gentle to me because I didn't write for a very long time. :o

( The Mistress of the Shadowlands / The Black Heart )